New Journey with You « Touching skies….

Opening up my Wings Today ..

No barriers are around anymore…

Wanna take a clear n a fresh deep breath

No clouds of fear anymore….

Loads of blissed Red Roses…

Fresh breeze of a new morning …

and a night studded with stars..

Some pure soul is blessing me ..

A gentle smile , lil drops in my eyes…

Arms wide open ..Trying to touch skies..

Bidding Good Bye to old sorrows,

And greeting up a new tomorrow !

You know what .. I got a bag with me

Holding it up with gentle care..

Full of feelings & emotions..

And all my Love for my special ones..

That’s the only treasure I have ..my dear

Come along I will show all that to you,

And may be you too start loving them..as I do

Come with me.. Yes, here on this way…

See the clouds are running away…

And a new rainbow is appearing there

Can you feel the purity in the wind?

I never found them likewise before..

Its strange how they come to know?

Every single thing is changing here

I never tell them … may be its you ..

Did you know this already ?

That I wished every time Just For You !!

Rewa Smriti Says:

August 12, 2008 at 7:35 pm

Beautiful poem. You left nothing but said everything in few words…!

Hmmm…tuhare poem ko padhkar kuch yaad aa rahi hai…isq chupaye na chupe…ye isq bada harzai hai…

Jitender Singh Says:

August 19, 2008 at 10:04 pm

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Some pure soul is blessing me …….
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Today again, I was not interested to write/read anything here but, your lines forced me and I setteled for a while on your blog and inevitavely, the tears of happiness started bursting out and as a result this compliment is going to be created in view of you and your thoughts. I apologize for if there remains anything not up to the mark and non-convincuing in the subsequent lines:

You are really blessed because my chhutki, you deserve it in all good senses. Incredible creation that has enough harmony to capture the realistic paradigms of the Love. Whatever you think, whatever you feel, you write that; in other words, your thoughts are pure and original, and, moreover, these are free from any kind of artificiality that is usually seen in most of the poems generally people use to write in modern era. It is this that makes your creations “special” and “very different”. As they say “purity leads to permanency,” this fits perfectly in the respect of your poems. These are not merely poems but “the voice of your heart”.

It is well known that words are always much weaker than the feelings of heart, still your words look powerful enough to represent intense waves of sacred bounty for the special one. Oh one second call …. yes m back now; Yes this remminds me many fables and real regimes as well. Anyways, words can not bind the flow of your thoughts so I think I should stop here with making a buzz! to you to recall my wish that you have to fulfil. So go ahead, happiness is waiting for you….

Regards

Dr. Bhupendra Says:

August 22, 2008 at 11:49 pm

your emotions and words are very very beautiful , they seem to be pure as well as true keep going …

shiv shankar pandit Says:

August 23, 2008 at 7:39 pm

hi tanu
well i have read this poem so many times,then u would wonder why didnt comment if i did so.
the fact is that sometimes after reading certain things,our feelings are freezed,which

represents that thing is simply THE BEST,OUT STANDING,AWESOME AND PERFECT one.so finally

bec.of this i was not able to comment.
well u have written like native poets,its really great…!!!
i wish i would have been the center of the poem,bec. it would really be a bliss to be with such feelings..
regards
shivshankar

Kaunquest Says:

August 25, 2008 at 2:00 pm

Tanu, Great poem.. It gives a feeling of freshness, freedom and excitement! Well written!

nitin Says:

September 17, 2008 at 10:25 am

yar plzz change the colour of ur blog page, u have such a woderful things on ur blog but people wont be abel to read that…dont u think..its a request dear.
thank u..
NITIN.