नाज़
March 30, 2008 — Tanu Shreeहे वस्त्र ! तुम्हे हो नाज़ की तुम जा लगे
जवानों के तन पर |
हे शस्त्र ! तुम्हे हो नाज़ की तुम जा लड़े
देश की रक्षा कर |
हे पुष्प !तुम्हें हो नाज़ की तुम जा चढ़े
शहीदों के शव पर |
हे वीर !तुम्हें हो नाज़ की तुम ढह गए
कर्म की पूजा कर |
ऐसे सपूत ऐसे रक्षक नहीं जन्मे है किसी देश में ,
हिन्दू हो या मुस्लिम रहते है सब एक ही परिवेश में ;
है नमन ऐसी माताओं को जिसने है इनको जन्म दिया
और गर्व है उनके पुत्रों पर जिसने देश हित कर्म किया !!
Note: I wrote this poem in 1999 when I was in 9th std …. This is my first creation !! I wrote it for 15th august function at school . Hope you all will like it and if any mistakes are there then please let me know!!
March 30, 2008 at 10:51 am
bahut sundar,one salute to u to for such nice poem,desh ke har jawan ko salami jo apni jaan ki parva kiye bina desh ki raksha karte hai.
March 30, 2008 at 12:44 pm
A beautiful idea. And all the more beautiful for “a first.” Dare I say that given a better sense of expression and it’ll start meaning a lot more …
March 30, 2008 at 1:43 pm
it is our karma to hail our motherland…as told by swami vivekananda…..and we can find such practical example only in india…for which every indian head is held high…..i dedicate the song from movie karma to my motherland…”aye watan tere liye hai
March 30, 2008 at 3:54 pm
Hi Dear Tanu
First of all thank you very much for sharing your very first creation. Its really a gem as it has been specially devoted to the pride of the Nations. More over its amazing that u wrote this beautiful poem when u were in 9th standard. Great achievement in younger age. I wish you keep on creating such wonderful touching poems in future and hope that u will continue to share your endeavors with us …
With best wishes and Lot of Love
Jitender Singh
March 30, 2008 at 7:31 pm
सुन्दर..भावपूर्ण अभिव्यक्ति.
March 30, 2008 at 9:12 pm
मुझे तोड़ लेना वनमाली,
उस पथ पर देना तुम फेंक,
मात्र भूमि पर शीश चढ़ाने,
जिस पथ जाए वीर अनेक!
Betu, itni achhi poem itne kam age mein bahut kum log likh pate hein! I felt every word have deep emotion with extra ‘layers of meaning’. And mujhe naaz hai tumper jo tumne itni achhi poem apne desh ke veeron ke liye likha hai!
luv u.