गम

गम अपने िकसी से कह न सके,

बस मन में ही उनको समेटे रहे !

जब भी िकसी ने उनको कुरेदा

आंसू बन कर बहने लगे

आंसुओं ने भी न साथ िदया

आँखें अब नम होती ही नहीं

गम पहले आँखों से जाते थे

पर अब तो वो रहते हैं वहीं !

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19 Responses to “गम”

  1. Jitender Singh Says:

    गम अपने िकसी से कह न सके,
    बस मन में ही उनको समेटे रहे !
    जब भी िकसी ने उनको कुरेदा
    आंसू बन कर बहने लगे
    आंसुओं ने भी न साथ िदया
    आँखें अब नम होती ही नहीं
    गम पहले आँखों से जाते थे
    पर अब तो वो रहते हैं वहीं !

    very nice…Tanu ….keep on writing n sharing….

    shayad unka aakhri ho ye sitam
    har sitam ye soch kar hum seh gaye

    regds

    Jitender Singh

  2. Rewa Says:

    Hmmm…nice poem dear!

    Jin zakhmo ko waqt bhar chupa hai, tum kyun unhe chede ja rahe ho….yeh gazal suno aur muskurate raho….isi ka naam zindagi hai.. :)

  3. mehhekk Says:

    bahut sundar,gum pehle ankhon se nikalte the,ab wo rehte hai wahi.

  4. Tanu Shree Says:

    @ Rewa di thanks ….u r the one jisne mujhe ye blog banane k liye kaha n guided me too….. so all the credit goes to u ….

    Keep on showing me the way…..

    @ jiitender…shukriya ji ….rewa di puch rahi thi aapko kya gum hai ???? so do tell her :)

    @mehek …thanks dear ….

  5. Rewa Says:

    Dear Sis,

    I am happy to read your lovely words. But, all credits goes to you as you only took initiative to create a blog and did it. I just wanted you to come in front and explore yourself. I feel, you have all the qualities which most of the girls are missing today. So, You must not miss anything in your life and move always ahead. I wish to see your success in all possible ways.

    At last something for my lovely sis :)

    Aa chal ke tujhe, main le ke chaluun
    ek aise gagan ke tale
    jahan gam bhii na ho, aansoo bhi na ho
    bas pyaar hii pyaar pale…….!

    wid luv

  6. Sonal Says:

    hey as u know that i had read all ur poems but
    every time i found sum new feelings after reading
    it.n dis is one of my favourite poem of urs.sumtimes i misses ur diary but i m really thankful to u that u hav created this page so that wenever i need to read it i will
    luv u……..

  7. Jitender Singh Says:

    agar gum na hote to khushi ka ehsaas na hota
    agar raat na hoti to din ka abhaas na hota….

    regds

  8. Rewa Says:

    Din hai, rat bhi hai,
    gum hai, khushi bhi hai,
    khuda yeh puch raha ki,
    ab aage aur kya chahiye?? :)

  9. Jitender Singh Says:

    haan ye sach hai din hai, raat hai
    khuda ki rehmat se har saugaat hai
    humen kya chahiye aur ae khuda
    humse-unka zanmon ka saath hai … :)

  10. Rewa Says:

    wah wah wah wah…
    kya khoob kaha hai,
    kahte rahiye,
    yun hi farmate rahiye,
    blog roopi gulshan ko,
    shabd roopi dust se,
    dustbin banate rahiye.. :P

  11. Jitender Singh Says:

    humne kaha hai hum kehte rahenge
    phoolon se is gulshan ko bharte rahenge
    tehni pe nazar log firaate rahenge
    ehsaas kuch phoolon ka karenge
    ahh kuch kaanton si bharenge
    ye silisile to sada chalte hi rahenge
    kuch ne saha kuch sehte rahenge

    aasha ke deep hum jalaate rahenge
    nadia ki dhara mein hum behte rahenge
    humne kaha hai hum kehte rahenge
    humne kaha hai hum kehte rahenge….

  12. Tanu Shree Says:

    sabse pehle @dear rewa di n jiten ji shairo shaiyari se mere blog ki shobha badhane ke liye dhanyawad ….kya baat hai aap logo ki…… maan gaye!!

    I hope ur this cute fight goes on n on….aakhir blog ko faiydaa ho raha hai…

    waise jiten ji aapko apna ek blog ab bana hi lena chahiye….
    itna acha likhte hai aap…to dusro ko use janane ka mauka to dijiye :)

    @ dear sonu i really felt nice ki tune yaha apne dil ki batein likhi….yes tune meri dairy padhi hai ..n .tujhe meri ye poem sabse achi lagti hai ye mujhe nahi pata tha….thanx for each word……luv u n mujhe yu hi guide kartii rehena..dear

  13. Jitender Singh Says:

    unki taraf se koi lafz nehi aaye hum intzaar karte reh gaye
    sab khairiyat to hai wahaan hum ye sochte hi reh gaye
    kehi bezubaan ho dubak gaye wo jinhen hum takte reh gaye
    hausla buland keejiye huzur jaise hum haste-2 sitam seh gaye
    aur sitam na karo chup reh kar ki hum aap ke ho kar reh gaye
    sun-na na pade kehin,dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye!

    regds

  14. Tanu Shree Says:

    Hello Jitender ji ab yaha to di ki panktiyan honi chahiye thi…. where is she??

    “unki taraf se koi lafz nehi aaye hum intzaar karte reh gaye
    sab khairiyat to hai wahaan hum ye sochte hi reh gaye”

    Superb sentiments…..
    I think everybody here wud agree that u shud creat a blog now…!!

    Kyu Rewa di kya vichar hai..????????? :)

    regards!!

  15. Rewa Says:

    Hello dear! hmm…..ur di is here :)

    haan to mera vichar yah hai ki….Mr. Sonu ko math ke sath hi rahne do. kya use blog create karne ke liye kah rahi ho….waise bhi wo math ki soutan nahi la sakta :P :lol:

  16. Tanu Shree Says:

    Kya baat hai di… But Sonu ji kya aap bhi aisa hi sochte hai…
    apne vichar kripya yaha prakat kare!!

  17. Jitender Singh Says:

    nehi blog mere basss ki baat nehi Rewa ne sai farmaya hai

    I love Mathematics….

    regds

  18. Tanu Shree Says:

    Hmmmm…Koi nahi jst keep posting ur comments here atleast,
    Jisse hume aapki writings se vanchit na rehna pade….Ok?? :lol:

  19. For U Says:

    Are aapka request koi maane na maane hum mante hai…. I wil keep posting here ok!!

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