गम
February 27, 2008 — Tanu Shreeगम अपने िकसी से कह न सके,
बस मन में ही उनको समेटे रहे !
जब भी िकसी ने उनको कुरेदा
आंसू बन कर बहने लगे
आंसुओं ने भी न साथ िदया
आँखें अब नम होती ही नहीं
गम पहले आँखों से जाते थे
पर अब तो वो रहते हैं वहीं !

गम अपने िकसी से कह न सके,
बस मन में ही उनको समेटे रहे !
जब भी िकसी ने उनको कुरेदा
आंसू बन कर बहने लगे
आंसुओं ने भी न साथ िदया
आँखें अब नम होती ही नहीं
गम पहले आँखों से जाते थे
पर अब तो वो रहते हैं वहीं !

February 27, 2008 at 12:14 am
गम अपने िकसी से कह न सके,
बस मन में ही उनको समेटे रहे !
जब भी िकसी ने उनको कुरेदा
आंसू बन कर बहने लगे
आंसुओं ने भी न साथ िदया
आँखें अब नम होती ही नहीं
गम पहले आँखों से जाते थे
पर अब तो वो रहते हैं वहीं !
very nice…Tanu ….keep on writing n sharing….
shayad unka aakhri ho ye sitam
har sitam ye soch kar hum seh gaye
regds
Jitender Singh
February 27, 2008 at 2:15 pm
Hmmm…nice poem dear!
Jin zakhmo ko waqt bhar chupa hai, tum kyun unhe chede ja rahe ho….yeh gazal suno aur muskurate raho….isi ka naam zindagi hai..
February 27, 2008 at 3:29 pm
bahut sundar,gum pehle ankhon se nikalte the,ab wo rehte hai wahi.
February 27, 2008 at 4:54 pm
@ Rewa di thanks ….u r the one jisne mujhe ye blog banane k liye kaha n guided me too….. so all the credit goes to u ….
Keep on showing me the way…..
@ jiitender…shukriya ji ….rewa di puch rahi thi aapko kya gum hai ???? so do tell her
@mehek …thanks dear ….
February 28, 2008 at 7:51 am
Dear Sis,
I am happy to read your lovely words. But, all credits goes to you as you only took initiative to create a blog and did it. I just wanted you to come in front and explore yourself. I feel, you have all the qualities which most of the girls are missing today. So, You must not miss anything in your life and move always ahead. I wish to see your success in all possible ways.
At last something for my lovely sis
Aa chal ke tujhe, main le ke chaluun
ek aise gagan ke tale
jahan gam bhii na ho, aansoo bhi na ho
bas pyaar hii pyaar pale…….!
wid luv
February 28, 2008 at 9:39 am
hey as u know that i had read all ur poems but
every time i found sum new feelings after reading
it.n dis is one of my favourite poem of urs.sumtimes i misses ur diary but i m really thankful to u that u hav created this page so that wenever i need to read it i will
luv u……..
February 28, 2008 at 10:57 am
agar gum na hote to khushi ka ehsaas na hota
agar raat na hoti to din ka abhaas na hota….
regds
February 28, 2008 at 11:10 am
Din hai, rat bhi hai,
gum hai, khushi bhi hai,
khuda yeh puch raha ki,
ab aage aur kya chahiye??
February 28, 2008 at 11:15 am
haan ye sach hai din hai, raat hai
khuda ki rehmat se har saugaat hai
humen kya chahiye aur ae khuda
humse-unka zanmon ka saath hai …
February 28, 2008 at 11:19 am
wah wah wah wah…
kya khoob kaha hai,
kahte rahiye,
yun hi farmate rahiye,
blog roopi gulshan ko,
shabd roopi dust se,
dustbin banate rahiye..
February 28, 2008 at 12:56 pm
humne kaha hai hum kehte rahenge
phoolon se is gulshan ko bharte rahenge
tehni pe nazar log firaate rahenge
ehsaas kuch phoolon ka karenge
ahh kuch kaanton si bharenge
ye silisile to sada chalte hi rahenge
kuch ne saha kuch sehte rahenge
aasha ke deep hum jalaate rahenge
nadia ki dhara mein hum behte rahenge
humne kaha hai hum kehte rahenge
humne kaha hai hum kehte rahenge….
February 28, 2008 at 3:16 pm
sabse pehle @dear rewa di n jiten ji shairo shaiyari se mere blog ki shobha badhane ke liye dhanyawad ….kya baat hai aap logo ki…… maan gaye!!
I hope ur this cute fight goes on n on….aakhir blog ko faiydaa ho raha hai…
waise jiten ji aapko apna ek blog ab bana hi lena chahiye….
itna acha likhte hai aap…to dusro ko use janane ka mauka to dijiye
@ dear sonu i really felt nice ki tune yaha apne dil ki batein likhi….yes tune meri dairy padhi hai ..n .tujhe meri ye poem sabse achi lagti hai ye mujhe nahi pata tha….thanx for each word……luv u n mujhe yu hi guide kartii rehena..dear
March 2, 2008 at 9:03 am
unki taraf se koi lafz nehi aaye hum intzaar karte reh gaye
sab khairiyat to hai wahaan hum ye sochte hi reh gaye
kehi bezubaan ho dubak gaye wo jinhen hum takte reh gaye
hausla buland keejiye huzur jaise hum haste-2 sitam seh gaye
aur sitam na karo chup reh kar ki hum aap ke ho kar reh gaye
sun-na na pade kehin,dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye!
regds
March 2, 2008 at 5:37 pm
Hello Jitender ji ab yaha to di ki panktiyan honi chahiye thi…. where is she??
“unki taraf se koi lafz nehi aaye hum intzaar karte reh gaye
sab khairiyat to hai wahaan hum ye sochte hi reh gaye”
Superb sentiments…..
I think everybody here wud agree that u shud creat a blog now…!!
Kyu Rewa di kya vichar hai..?????????
regards!!
March 3, 2008 at 7:53 am
Hello dear! hmm…..ur di is here
haan to mera vichar yah hai ki….Mr. Sonu ko math ke sath hi rahne do. kya use blog create karne ke liye kah rahi ho….waise bhi wo math ki soutan nahi la sakta

March 3, 2008 at 12:20 pm
Kya baat hai di… But Sonu ji kya aap bhi aisa hi sochte hai…
apne vichar kripya yaha prakat kare!!
March 3, 2008 at 7:24 pm
nehi blog mere basss ki baat nehi Rewa ne sai farmaya hai
I love Mathematics….
regds
March 5, 2008 at 12:11 am
Hmmmm…Koi nahi jst keep posting ur comments here atleast,
Jisse hume aapki writings se vanchit na rehna pade….Ok??
March 22, 2008 at 1:05 am
Are aapka request koi maane na maane hum mante hai…. I wil keep posting here ok!!